mylittlejamjar | [Visual->Text] 1st Revenge, Dan Vs. Burns

Entry tags:

[Visual->Text] 1st Revenge, Dan Vs. Burns

[It starts with a shot of the sky. A small cat can be running over the scroll, trying to move it somewhere. Loud raspy breathing is heard nearby. The voice tries to say something, but all it seems to get out is coughing. Eventually, a black hoof appears to close the scroll.

Five minutes later, a message is sent out.]

Back here. Town square alley.

Body hurts. Breathing hurts. Can't get up. Need hospital.

If not real, go away. Tell Monojerk to stuff it.

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

[Blink.]

I...beg your pardon?

[By the by, Dan, you should start to feel less burny.]

[Less burns are always good.

Except when they aren't since he's anger is SO MUCH MORE CLEAR.]

You... dead.... have to be... dead.

[Well, to be fair, she is dead--]

I honestly have n-no idea what you're talking about.

[Strange...]

[She was one of them. One of those god damned ghosts, another ploy by Monobear, another fucking way to torture him and hurt him. He's so sick of being hurt. He's so sick of all of this.]

Stop taunting me, you swine.

I-I'm not! I'm trying to help you...!

[Besides, she's healing Dan. What reason would she have to taunt someone she just met?]

Edited 2014-09-01 22:46 (UTC)

[That is not a sentence Dan wanted to hear. Beat and Cynthia were all about "helping" and he knows he knows that was all a lie. Why would anyone help him? It was a fact that everyone in the world was selfish.

This is what probably made him to decide he was going to attempt kicking Homura.

[Considering that Dan is still a very long way from actually being healed - or in any way a good shape - the kick doesn't even come close to connecting.]

Wh-

[The glasses start to slide.]

What is wrong with you!?

[Well, at least his tendency to indulge in stupid ideas hasn't changed because THAT DEFINITELY HURT OH GOD but he'll try to keep it together in order to get this brat.

He grinds his teeth a bit, trying to ignore the taste of smoke in his mouth.]

Said the goddamn murderer zombie thing.

[Look, healing you isn't going to work if you try to deck the other person anyhow.

Also, besides the point that she is both of those things. She's holding onto her glasses right now.]

I-I'm just trying to help you! Don't you want to be healed?

Not by the likes of you.

[What with the whole "ghost" and "tool of Monobear" thing. Logically.]

What are you talking about!?

YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT, SHE-DEMON.

[OH GOD IT HURTS TO YELL and now his throat has started burning again.]

Just end the charade already.

...I really don't.

[Maybe if she had her omniscience, she'd know!]

Y-you shouldn't...do that. You'll hurt the healing.

I mean to hurt you.

[Daring to come out and make him feel like shit. For feeling bad that she died. Even the possibility that she's just a Monobear illusion enrages him.]

Wh--

[Do not slide down, glasses. Do. Not.]

I just met you! I-I've done nothing wrong!

[Unless healing you is a bad thing. Dan should be feeling somewhat batter, right?]

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

[Visual->Text] 1st Revenge, Dan Vs. Burns

Re: [action]

[action]

Re: [action]

[action]

[action]

[action]

Re: [action]

[action]

Re: [action]

[action]

[action]

[action]

Re: [action]

[action]

Re: [action]