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Arthur Curry | Aquaman ([personal profile] italktofish) wrote in [community profile] mylittlejamjar2013-10-23 09:54 pm
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First Adventure | [Visual]

[Hello, Equestria. The scroll's video feed opens up on a very large orange pony with a yellow mane, beard, and tail. There's a large trident propped up on the wall behind him, and it matches his Cutie Mark rather well.]

OUTRAGEOUS! Just when I thought this day couldn't get any more unusual, they've given me a magic scroll to record my adventure with! How thoughtful!

[Bad news: he's mistaken the scroll for some sort of personal diary instead of a communication device. This is because he likely quit paying attention when he got it.]

But every adventure needs a good title! I'll call this one..."THE TIME I GOT TURNED INTO A WEE ORANGE PONY AND GOT A MAGICAL SCROLL BEFORE STARTING OUT ON THE REAL ADVENTURE!"

So this adventure all started when I was in the ocean one minute, and on land the next, only I had HOOVES...

[Someone had better stop him before he starts giving an overblown, exaggerated play-by-play of his life story in Equestria up to this point, really.]
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ponymechanic: (what the-?)

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[personal profile] ponymechanic 2013-10-26 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
Experimentation? That doesn't sound pleasant.
sailorlaughter: (THREADJACK!)

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[personal profile] sailorlaughter 2013-10-26 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
The experiments were actually totally fun! We got to read bad books with our friends and laugh at them! I read one with a sheep once.
ponymechanic: (huh?)

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[personal profile] ponymechanic 2013-10-26 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
That doesn't sound so bad. Though how bad are talking here? As in Twilight bad? Or even 50 Shades of Grey bad?
sailorlaughter: (Omg yay!)

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[personal profile] sailorlaughter 2013-10-26 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! We TOTALLY read Twilight! Yeah, it had that boring girl, and a truck, and I think some guy...
ponymechanic: (frown)

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[personal profile] ponymechanic 2013-10-26 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Yikes. I haven't read it myself, but I know it has bad purple prose in it. At least you didn't read 50 Shades of Grey. Those books are much worse than Twilight apparently.
sailorlaughter: (Skeptical)

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[personal profile] sailorlaughter 2013-10-26 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Really? Aw, MAN, the copy WE read was just black!
ponymechanic: (facehoof)

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[personal profile] ponymechanic 2013-10-26 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
That's not what I mean. Purple prose is a style of writing that's so flowery it breaks the flow of the story in order to draw your attention to it. It's a bad way to write and tends to annoy readers.
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